Here's the teaser for my Novella. I'm giving the first two chapters on my Blog. Thanks to my husband and my other kid Mara, Carla and my Sand Mountain girls-Dawn, Gabbi, Hannah and Autum. Thanks bunches y'all- for reading and encouraging!
I don't remember a
lot about the girl I forgot. I'm writing
down everything so I can have it later.
But I'll start as the beginning.
I really only remember bits and pieces about what happened.
Flashes.
Sounds.
Thoughts.
Driving in the
dark.
Topping the
mountain, the lights of houses twinkling on the steep sides and reflecting off
the water below.
Tears falling,
obscuring my vision as I navigate the car around the hairpin curves. I’m running from something. For the life of me I can’t remember
what.
Screeching brakes.
Tires sliding on
gravel.
Someone screaming.
Golden lights
twinkling below me, houses snuggled cozily in the side of the mountain.
Falling, feeling
my body come up out of the seat, weightlessness.
That is where I
always woke up.
But this time I don’t. Could this be real?
More glass
breaking, and a thump and the groan of bending metal. My head jerks forward and then back. Like riding on bumper cars at the fair.
Darkness. Coldness.
Wetness on the side of my face.
My mouth tastes
bitter, the unmistakable taste of blood.
The lights were
above me, as I sank into the inky water.
I fumble for my
seat belt. My hands are wet with something;
they slide over the seat belt lock.
I reach for the
handle, and push against the door.
It won't budge.
This was the way
it was ending?
My life? How could it be?
I refuse to
believe that it could end like this.
Someone will
rescue me… Someone had to see the car when it went off the road.
Just sit
still. Someone will come…
Then I am floating.
Big hands jerk me. Air escapes from my lungs in big bubbles, I see it floating above me in the light above me. I try to follow it up... I am being pulled up and down at the same time. Someone is with me, pulling me, swimming, pulling, swimming... I fight to keep my mouth closed; if I breathe in I will drown.
My body is awash
in pain but I am being pulled up. My
lungs scream for air. It is unbearable, this agony. Only a
few more minutes. I am going up.
I will be safe in a few minutes. A light dances over me, refracted by the rippling
waves above my head.
I feel myself
break through. I remember this was what
it felt like to be born. The moon is bright above me and I gulp air greedily
but then I fall into darkness.
I am nothing. Less than nothing. A vapor.
Floating like a cloud pushed by angry winds. The
absence of everything. I wonder if this is
death. Some people say when you die then
there’s nothing…it never sounded this awful.
Not even darkness because
darkness would be something. Something
to fear, something to fight against. This,
I decided could be Hell. Because where I
am… God isn’t. There is no light, no
happiness, no contentment. Only longing
remains. Hunger for something I didn’t
have or know.
Please God… If you can hear me… Give me one
more chance.
Darkness and
nothing is my only reply.
But then…
Voices. Far away. Am I hearing voices or could it
only be my imagination?
Darkness again.
I sleep; I don’t
know how long.
People float in
and out of my consciousness like ghosts.
Disembodied spirits that flit in and then flit out in the twinkling of
an eye. They lean over me. They say things I don’t understand.
A man is
here. He is vaguely familiar.
He is crying, but
I don’t know why. His tough hands are
calloused but gentle as they touch mine.
There is the ever so slight stain of grease under his nails and I know
this can’t be a doctor. He talks to
me. He tells me to wake up.
I wonder if this
is the man that saved me.
I remember the big
hands pulling me out of the water.
Yes. This must be him. My hero. Poor guy. I want to tell him that he did okay. He can go home now but I’m too tired. Too tired to talk or move so I sleep and
dream.
I dream of
Paris. The city sparkles underneath me
like a jewel. I can see my breath from
up here and I smile down on my adopted city.
A man to my left gets down on one knee.
The woman with him starts to cry as he holds out a ring to her. I don’t understand any of it. They’re clearly German- there are no French
people on the Eiffel Tower. Just
tourists like us. We get into the elevator and ride back down. My stomach grumbles as I fight my way through
the souvenir hawkers. The metro is warm
at least. A man passes me. I am struck by what a beautiful man he is and
though I was brought up never to stare, I do from under my lashes when he
thinks I am not looking. He is the kind
of man I thought only existed in the movies; well built, blonde hair, blue
eyes, sharp features. He has that
typical French cockiness and sex appeal that I find both irresistible and
somewhat intimidating. His eyes catch
mine and though I know French people don’t smile at strangers on the subway so
I’m not offended when my smile is not returned, but being American, I can’t
help it.
It’s been years of saving to bring me
here. Right now, I don’t care if he
thinks I’m a stupid American. I don’t
care if he looks down his French nose at me- bumming around in my blue jeans
and white sneakers and my camera flopping against my chest as the train
screeches to a halt. Nothing can get me
down. I’m here. In Paris and I’m happy. I see him again, when I get on the train and
I take my seat. His blue eyes hold on to
mine. This time the corners of his lips
turn up and he doesn’t take his eyes off me until I look away, embarrassed by
his attention. I have a fiancé back home; I know I shouldn’t be flirting with
strangers on the metro. I know I
shouldn’t even be looking at another man but I look up again. He is still
looking at me as if he knows me, almost as if he can see right into my soul. I
feel a connection with him, something I can’t explain and don’t quite
understand. Come with me. His eyes are a striking shade of blue- almost
violet. They speak to me. Come with me and leave everything
behind. Come with me and I will make
your dreams come true… The Metro train grinds to a stop and we both stand but
he never takes his eyes off of me… I know it’s wrong but I smile at him again
and he follows me out.
“Hello pretty
American girl.” He says in English. He isn’t French, perhaps German. He has only has a slight accent which I can’t
place. “It is a cold night and a cup of
coffee would be perfect. However I hate
to sit in a café alone. As I see you
have no escort, would you care to allow me to buy you a cup?”
I should say
no. I have a fiancé back home, but
tonight I am in Paris. The city of love-
I will never have this chance again. I slip my engagement ring in my jean
pocket and when he extends his arm; I take it.
That dream
fades. The voices come back.
A man’s voice.
“You have to wake up.” Someone tells
me. “You’ve got to come back to
me….Please… for the children…”
A woman’s voice.
“If she does come back, she’ll have brain damage.”
Somewhere a man is
crying like his heart is broken and I feel bad for him.
“I can’t. She’s my wife. I can’t leave her.” The same man again.
Another
voice. An older man. “She’s basically a vegetable.” He tells someone in a hushed tone. “The best thing would be to pull the
plug. Let her go in peace.”
I open my
eyes. I’m in a little cubicle and
somehow I know it’s the ICU. I wonder if
this is a dream or real.
I hear bits and
pieces of conversations from around me before I fall asleep again.
I wonder where the
man is who was crying. He seems so close
but far away at the same time. Like
we’re on opposite sides of a very tall wall and I can hear him but I can’t
reach him.
“Wake up and come
back to me.” He is begging but it is
from somewhere else, I realize, perhaps the next cubicle. I wish I could get out of this bed. I’d give him a hug at least…
I drift off again…
sleep is good…
“Come with me my
love.” A silky voice says and I feel an
overwhelming rush of desire. I know that
voice! “Come with me and I’ll make all
your dreams come true…” That’s what he
said… I remember. That’s what he said…
I want to slip
away with him. Just like I did on the
metro… that was so many years ago. A
lifetime ago…
“Just squeeze my
hand.” The man is begging in the next
cubicle. “Just let me know you hear
me. Please, baby. I love you.”
“She can’t hear
you. She’s… not there any more… the
person you loved is gone… you should think about ending it.”
I hear him wail
pitifully and my gut wrenches. I want to
leave. Why won’t they let me out of this
bed?
Another nurse
leans over me. More medicine. More sleep.
“Come away with me
my love. My beloved. Come to me…”
“Come back baby. I need you.
I’m sorry for what I said.
Please, please, open your eyes!”
I want more than
anything to be away from this man’s pain.
“Come to me and
leave the world behind. It’s only you
and I, my beloved. Come to me and leave
everything…”
“Yes.” I tell him.
Anything to get away from this place; from the sounds of death and hopelessness and sadness, from this man and the pain that he carries
with him. It threatens to tear my very
soul asunder with his pain. Get me out
of here. Please. I will go with you.
“Good…The choice
is made…”
The nurses are
moving me again. They’re always
pestering me. Trying to get me to wake
up. Don’t they know that I’m just
sleeping? I’m sleeping, if only they
will let me alone… Go bother someone else.
Someone who needs help. I’m
fine. Just leave me alone… No, I don’t
want to wake up. Oh, won’t they let me
sleep just a little bit longer? I’m so
tired…
Night.
Nurses.
White lights.
Bare walls.
Bleeps and
alarms.
I close my eyes
and float in darkness until a voice calls me into the light.
“Andrea.”
Not the same voice
but familiar just the same.
“Andrea.”
That’s when I
remember my name.
Until then I was
just a cloud with no name. Only a dream.
“Andrea. Wake up.”
Where am I?
I open my
eyes.
People are crowded
around me. People I don’t know; all looking
at me in amazement like I’ve done something astounding. I’m on center stage. I wonder if this is how
a baby feels being born.
A
good looking doctor sits right in front of me. Blonde hair, blue eyes, looks to
be in his mid thirties. I am drawn to
his eyes. The weirdest kind of blue-
purple really. I’ve seen eyes like those once before…where have I seen them? Over
his left shoulder I see two nurses- a blonde and a redhead and peering
anxiously over his right shoulder is another, older doctor with a beard.
“Andrea.” The doctor with the weird blue eyes says and
I look up at him. I like the way he says
my name; the European way, not the American way. It sounds like ‘Ondrea’.
“Can you speak to
us, honey?”
My mouth is dry
and my throat is on fire. I feel like
I’ve swallowed a porcupine.
I manage to mumble
something and they all seem to get very excited.
“Andrea. Do you
know where you are?” The handsome young doctor asks.
I’m not Einstein, but I’m guessing a
hospital Doc. I think to
myself. Might have said it too, but it
hurts too much. “Disneyland.” I say finally.
My audience’s eyes
grow wide and I realize that they think I’m serious. I can almost read their thoughts.
They think I have
brain damage or something.
“Hah…” I groan.
“Just kidding Doc.” I say and
just to prove I have some sense I tell them I’m in the hospital.
They act like I’ve
just told them the winning lottery numbers and I wonder what’s the big
deal. Anyone with half a brain could
tell this was a hospital.
“Disneyland.” The older bearded doctor chuckles. “What a fine joke.”
Like he knew I was
joking. I saw that look on his
face. It would have curdled milk.
The handsome one
in front hasn’t taken his eyes off me.
It’s unnerving and I’d try to squirm away if it didn’t hurt to
move. He smiles triumphantly at me and I
wonder what the big deal is. I was only
asleep. “Not Disneyland, but you can go
there as soon as you leave.” He chuckles and pats my hand. “There’s that sense
of humor I love!”
Who in the heck is
this? I wonder to myself. I know him but then again I don’t. It’s like
we met a lifetime ago. I start to drift off but he brings me back with a
question.
“Do you know what
happened?” He asks and this time I don’t
have a cute answer. My face crumples up
as I try to remember.
“Do you remember
anything?”
“No.” I croak.
I sound like a bullfrog. Real
attractive.
“It’s okay,
honey.” The doctor says. “Don’t worry.
You’re safe and I’m here. That’s all you need to know.”
This guy has the
best bedside manner I’ve ever heard of calling me honey and telling me he’s
here, not to worry- where did he come from?
I look back into those strange blue eyes and think that he needs a
raise.
I’m going to feel
like an idiot I think to myself. I know
but I ask anyway. I’ve seen him before.
I should know him but the memory flirts on the edge of my consciousness,
just far enough that I cannot reach it.
I can feel it there but I can’t make myself remember. I know this man.
“Who—“I
manage. “Are you?”
They look at each
other like I’ve just asked them what planet I’m on. The redhead and the blonde exchange nervous
glances and the good looking doctor turns a little pale.
“Andrea.” Dr. Blue eyes says. “Honey…I’m your husband.”
Now it’s his turn
to joke. “Hahahaha” I manage but the
stricken faces around me tell me it’s the truth.
My husband? No. He
can’t be my husband. I’d know my own
husband right?
The room spins and
my eyes roll back in my head. I’m
out. I fight to regain composure but I’m
down for the count.
I wake up
later. I don’t know what time it is or
how long I’ve been asleep.
Dr. Blue eyes is
here, holding my hand. I resist the urge
to take it away from him because it’s not normal for a doctor to act this way
with his patient. It’s a little lifetime
movie of the week if you ask me…
“Andrea.” He says when he sees me looking at him and he
gives me a shy smile.
“What’s up
Doc?” I say. He looks at me like I’ve lost my mind but
then he recovers.
“Ah yes. I remember.
Bugs Bunny.”
Where did he come
from? The moon? Come to think of it, he does have a slight
accent. Maybe they don’t have Bugs Bunny
where he’s from.
I look at him and
try to think of something to say. When I
can’t he takes my hand.
“Hi, honey.”
There he goes
again. Calling me honey. I start to pull my hand away from him but
then I remember. Oh, yeah. He’s supposed to be my husband.
I don’t know how to
explain it. He doesn’t feel right. I close my eyes and imagine my husband. Images come to my mind but not complete
images. Impressions really.
A large muscular
man. Dark hair. Strong, rough hands. The feeling of being enveloped in a tight
embrace, listening to a steady beating heart, the taste of tender, knowing
kisses and the warmth of another body wrapped around mine like so many
blankets.
Yes, that was my
husband. The thing was, when I looked at
this stranger in front of me I felt none of those things.
This is some kind
of joke.
I’ve never seen
him before in my life.
No… I have… where
had I seen him?
“It’s me.” He says nervously. “Your husband.”
What am I supposed
to say to that?
“Glad to meet
you.” I tell him. It was the best I could do given the present
circumstances.
He laughs. The skin around his eyes crinkles when he
does.
“You’re
confused.” I tell him. “I think you have the wrong person. I can’t be your wife.”
He laughs again
but his face is sad.
“But you
are.” The words make him sound like a
lost little boy.
“I don’t even know
your name. I’ve never seen you before.”
That’s when he
starts crying. A little. Not pitiful like the guy in the next cubicle,
but his eyes tear up and he wipes the tears away with the back of his hand.
“I—.” He starts
and doesn’t finish. He looks away and
swallows. “My name is Doyle.”
“Doyle.” I repeat.
The name sounds unfamiliar in my mouth.
“Doyle.” I say again but it
doesn’t ring a bell. I swallow
hard. “Why don’t I remember you?”
“You have
amnesia.” He tells me. “Do you know what that means?”
Amnesia? Am I trapped in a soap opera? Yes, that’s it. I’m asleep in front of the television. A soap opera is playing.
“Amnesia.” I repeat when there’s no commercial break. My
brow crinkles and I squeeze my eyes shut and try to think. How did I get
amnesia? I can remember the
accident. This is ridiculous. I’m going
nuts. “What?” I ask.
He shifts in his
seat and leans in. “Amnesia. You suffered an injury to your head” He
starts into doctor mode but I stop him with a wave of my taped up hand. It pulls at the IV and I wince.
I’m irritated by
all of this. I know what amnesia is and
I tell him so. He looks impressed or
shocked. I’m not quite sure which.
I know. I return
his nod of disbelief. I can’t believe it
either.
“Do you know how
you got amnesia?” He asks. “Do you remember anything about the
accident?”
The mountain. The car.
The dark. Falling. Water.
Yeah, I have a vague recollection of what happened.
“I—was in an
automobile accident.” I say and he looks
at me to finish.
“I think I went
off the mountain… into the water.” I
guess and from the horrified look on Dr. Blue Eye’s face I was either dead
right or terribly wrong. I couldn’t tell
which.
He leans in to me
and shakes his head. His color is gone
from his face and he’s already pale. Now
he looks like a ghost,
“Andrea. You were hit by a car. Crossing the street.”
I shake my head
and it hurts.
“No. I remember the water.” I tell him and he leans closer and puts his
hand over my lips.
“Andrea. Not too loud.” He looks around like he’s trying to keep
something secret. “Listen honey, you were crossing the street right here. You were leaving with Marilyn and Jackie to
get some lunch. Some guy ran the red
light and hit you. You were thrown
thirty feet into another car.”
“No.” I tell him.
“I remember water!”
“Honey. We’re half a mile from the river. Of course you remember water. But you weren’t in it. You may have dreamed it.”
But I do remember
water. I remember the mountain. How it felt to fall. The sound that the water made as it seeped
into the car. I remember being pulled
out…I try to convince him but he just shakes his head.
It infuriates me
and I raise my voice.
“I remember!” I tell him and he puts his fingers over my
lips.
My eyes flash in
anger. How dare he try to silence me
like that? If I wasn’t all hooked up I’d
get out of this bed and show him a thing or two…
“Darling.” His eyes look up at the next cubicle like he
can see through it. “Beloved,
listen. The lady in the next cube was on
the mountain. She’s the one that fell in
the water. She’s – not doing -- well.
You—you must have heard everything and dreamed it was you. You were brought in around the same time… Be
quiet please. Her family is distraught.”
Then it dawns on
me.
The man I’ve heard
crying!
Can you hear in a
coma? Yes, I think so. I look up at him and my eyes well up with
tears of my own. The woman next to me
may lose her life and the only memories I thought I had aren’t mine at
all. They belong to her! I’m angry and sad and I feel a little
betrayed by my own mind. I can’t
remember my parents, my childhood, my wedding.
This man in front of me who claims to be my husband is a stranger. I
want to go home and crawl into bed and pull the covers over my head and make this
whole crazy dream go away, but I don’t know where my house is.
That’s when I lose
it. For the first time since the
accident- I cry.
Doyle leans over
me and puts his head on my shoulder. I
think if he were able he would have crawled in the bed with me. He comforts me as best he can and cries with
me.
When there are no
tears left he looks at me. His violet
blue eyes draw me in and I wonder how I could have forgotten them?
“We will work it
out honey. I’m… just glad you’re back to
me.” He offers me a small smile. “Can I kiss you?” He asks sheepishly, almost like a nervous
teenager and I’m not sure if I should be comforted or scandalized by it.
I don’t know what
to tell him. He’s a stranger to me but
at the same time, he’s my husband.
I nod. On television they say doing normal stuff
might help bring one’s memory back. I’m
willing to give it a try but I wonder if I will know what to do. I close my
eyes and hope that this is the kiss that brings all my memories back to
life!
It works that way
in fairy tales.
He leans in, and
his lips touch mine and I feel the fireworks instantly.
I’ve done this
before! I know I have, even if I don’t
remember- my body seems to and responds to his kiss.
But that’s
all. No sudden surge of memories, no
life flashing before my eyes. I sigh a
little disappointed that my memory hasn’t returned but my body tingles and I
respond. The kiss deepens, and for an
instant I am swept up in a torrent of longing and desire and I know I could
lose myself… or what’s left of myself in this man.
It scares me. My hair seems to stand up and it feels like I
have had cold water poured over my body.
I pull in a shaky breath as he moves away from me.
He smiles almost
triumphantly at me, like he has won some battle that I didn’t even know we were
having. The look is both sinister and sexy and it unnerves me for the most
part. If you give in to him, you will lose yourself. Something in the far corner of my mind warns
me. My heart pounds in my ears and I take a breath.
“I’ll be back
soon. Sleep my love. You need your rest.”
I nod and lean my
head back. I cut my eye to the
window. It is night again. I never wake in the daylight. He leans over me and kisses me again on the
forehead . I feel a strange tingly
sensation in my body, almost like an electric shock. I look up at him in surprise but suddenly
feel like all the energy has been drained.
I never get a chance to say anything more.
© L.
T. Crane 2012
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